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Domochevsky
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Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:02 pm Post subject: He put it off for weeks... |
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Alright, some serious zombie action! You are absolved for 2 of your randomly chosen missdeeds.
The zoomed in background in panel 1... yeah. Cheap.
The slice in panel 3 is a little unclear as well, the movement is difficult to get.
The belly line in panel 4 on EL looks better now, though.
But i question the whitespace, its a little too much just to hide those strips.
Overall i approve.
(I propably dont have to mention the JavaDickery from topwebcomics, and yes, i block javascript. But even if i activate it for that site it still wont work. ) |
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The Author
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Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 3:14 pm Post subject: Re: He put it off for weeks... |
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| Domochevsky wrote: | Alright, some serious zombie action! You are absolved for 2 of your randomly chosen missdeeds.  |
Great! Then I'll choose...uh...let's say...last week's strip and the invention of Syphilis.
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The slice in panel 3 is a little unclear as well, the movement is difficult to get. |
I would guess so - I'm not even sure which way that blade is moving, myself. Originally, he was just holding it, but that looked kinda lame - so I added the motion blur as a kind of afterthought.
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But i question the whitespace, its a little too much just to hide those strips.  |
I wanted to separate the two locations more clearly, but I should probably have looked for something less lazy.
| Domochevsky wrote: | (I propably dont have to mention the JavaDickery from topwebcomics, and yes, i block javascript. But even if i activate it for that site it still wont work. ) |
I tried it again and it does work for me now, but only if I allow javascript and re-load the TWC page *before* clicking the "I want to vote for this comic". |
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Domochevsky
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Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 11:59 am Post subject: Re: He put it off for weeks... |
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| The Author wrote: |
Great! Then I'll choose...uh...let's say...last week's strip and the invention of Syphilis.
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Ah, so it was you... i always suspected.
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I tried it again and it does work for me now, but only if I allow javascript and re-load the TWC page *before* clicking the "I want to vote for this comic".
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That way it works. Still questionable.  |
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 3:48 pm Post subject: Re: He put it off for weeks... |
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| Domochevsky wrote: |
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I tried it again and it does work for me now, but only if I allow javascript and re-load the TWC page *before* clicking the "I want to vote for this comic".
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That way it works. Still questionable.  |
I'm not very happy with it, either...and it's kinda they even have that kind of problem at TWC - somebody must be taking his webcomicking a tad bit too seriously, apparently. |
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